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If I were written by ~Sleeping-Elf:iconSleeping-Elf:



If I were written,
       how would I taste?

I could be a dictionary  
      - bland -
yet a necessity.
       It’s possible I could have
the flavour of receipts,
     spit me out,
get your money back –
it won’t affect your
statutory rights.

Perhaps I’d be
a top-shelf magazine –
       an addictive tang kept as a treat.
Maybe you’d trace
your tongue
over me,
       as if I were the icing of a sonnet.

If I were written,
I wonder if you’d try me
at all.
©2005-2009 ~Sleeping-Elf
:iconsleeping-elf:

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Well I thought it was funny :giggle:

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Given 2006-10-14

If I were written by ~Sleeping-Elf is a cute poem that makes you wonder what kind of literature you would be. (Featured by `imperfect)

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:iconjessichu:
Maybe you’d trace
your tongue
over me,
as if I were the icing of a sonnet.


I love this part.
:iconsleeping-elf:
Thank you :D

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It doesn't hurt to be nice! :)
:iconjessichu:
My pleasure.

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being undead isn't being alive
- e.e. cummings

I'll let you be in my dreams if I can be in yours
- bob dylan
:iconthexhystericxeskimo:
Nice concept, but like I've said before, the structure you use confuses me a little.

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I hope you choke on a cardboard cut-out of Julia Roberts. x
:iconsleeping-elf:
Thanks. Haha, I'm confusing myself lately when it comes to my work, hopefully it'll get better when I manage to get sleep >.<

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It doesn't hurt to be nice! :)
:iconthexhystericxeskimo:
No sleep?

Sleeping tablets o.o?

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I hope you choke on a cardboard cut-out of Julia Roberts. x
:iconsleeping-elf:
Haha, now that's the funny thing... I'm on anti-depressents, my counsellor switched my pills around, because these ones are meant to HELP me sleep :laughing: Not exactly spot on, methinks..

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It doesn't hurt to be nice! :)
:iconaverage-freak05:
it is funny and your a gen-i-ous! One of the most orginal poems I've had the pleasure to read

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:iconbeen-training-dogs:
"It’s possible I could have
the flavour of receipts,
spit me out,
get your money back –
it won’t affect your
statutory rights."

haha i love this part.
- it is funny and very original :)

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Ryu says "HADOKEN!!"
Shameless self promotion :crazy: - check my gallery! ~been-training-dogs
:icontimmythemule:
It made me smile to myself. Interesting concept also.

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Uncertain as the fingering of a chord torn prematurely, from a piano's womb!

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